We Are Nearing The Shore Comments

This is an excellent poem.Well-selected words.A 10.

Hi Sathya. what a great piece of work showing the great effort neededto reach your goal. well done Regards Dave T.

Very positive. It is as easy to see sunshine as it is to see shadows. My ten in return. Warm regards, Sandra

Wow! This is a very inspiring write, (and I no longer inspire easily) .

Just beautiful Sathya Bhaiya- these are the songs which need to be sung to each other; though through barbed wires and gulf of mistrust

a beautiful description! rgds

A really excellent poem, you have a wonderful way with words. Best wishes, Andrew

Very beautifully written. Gives off lots of enthusiasm, especially in the second part of the poem. Excellent work. Thats a 10 from me: -)

Descriptive poem. Beautifully written. Keep it up

a good poem with lot of patriotic zeal...well done, Satya...10

So deeply motivational....Those words serve an intangible asset to your nation...Great write.

a captivating write...well versed...great... Ency Bearis

A great call to our compatriots! A ni9ce poem. Thanks for sharing!

is shore end of sailing or respite from the woe-ridden...? shore is always tempting to a sailor...r nt we all sailors?

the flow in the poem is so awesome, shore's beauty is here in your poem

NICE... thumbs up, u did a great job with this one! ! ! ! !

as if saying no to the worldly woes....... excellent line. very impresive surely a 10.

A nice poem with a dream of whats to come if we try.

Sir, Your poem is very good.

Dear Sathya, A powerful reminder of changless significance; the marvel and splendor of nature itself both reveals... and calls us to a higher realm - infinitely higher than human good is. All earthly woes are training for Eternity. In this poem, I like in particular your unyieldingly admirable call to 'THE SHORE.' One of my favorite lines is: 'let not sloth rust your grit.' It is skillfully written. Thank you for your thougtful commentary on my poem. God bless you, Dorothy.