Saturday, October 28, 2017

We Are Mostly Water (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ocean expands
In us as liquid solid.
Organized water
Percolates through all life forms.
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Paul Hartal
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Valsa George 31 October 2017

Scientific information turned into a beautiful Tanka!

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Sandra Feldman 29 October 2017

Amazing data here Am I going to hear myself flowing Each time I walk the Sphere? Great didactic poem! A pleasure.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2017

Such a brilliant write, Paul...10++++

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