Wednesday, November 12, 2008

We Are Just Dust Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the hushed, still hourglass of eternity,
Sifting softly, we trickle, timelessly,
Fine as thistledown on whispered air,
Silent sandgrain specks of misty nothingness
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C Richard Miles
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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

A fascinating and rhythmic poem that I could not stop reading, it's rhyme enticed me all the way through. Enjoyed reading this poem, your imagery is captivating! We are dust in the hushed, still hourglass of eternity: struck a chord deep within my being! An excellent and well written poem. Love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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