Wednesday, May 4, 2005

We Are Fruit People. Comments

Rating: 5.0

love-hungry teenage boy ripe
for the fruit of the world, yearning
for a taste of satisfaction, you buckle your
knees at every passing vine and fall to the earth
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Zoe Nyght
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Poetry Hound 05 May 2005

A very sweet poem, Zoe. Nice one.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 05 May 2005

Haiku for this poem: Fructose is sugar makes love to tongue of people can use for fruitcake. H

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Peter A. Crowther 05 May 2005

Great imagery as with all your poems

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Zoe Nyght

Zoe Nyght

Artesia, California
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