Together we are, everything and all.
Not destined to sulk, by the wayside fall.
Or sit all alone.
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The beauty and imagery of this poem compel one to read and re-read it again and again.
Aweinspiring poem against disunity and chosen loneliness! The aquatic imagery is poetically refreshing. And the rhyme scheme makes it a tour de force quality poetry.
Very nice to read which leaves a good feeling within the self and its worded lines are perfect...in retrospect it is like a mirror to my own happy wed life thanks for this poem...regards
The happiness and bliss of being together is celebrated by feasting upon Mother Nature. It's imaginative, surreal a passionate, can be said a painting in words with beautiful visuals.
Sat, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, it truly is magical, Thank you!
'WE are Everything' this poem is a masterpiece, it so well written, it's absolutely wonderful, you've done a fine job here, Saadat. Blessings! ! !
This poem is so cool! A vivid imagination, composed beautifully! Loved it! Keep doing the good work! Good Luck!
This one is so rich in imagery. Fabulous composition, indeed! I rate it a perfect 10.
dear saadat.....i am sweapt in the tide and flow of this beautiful poem! a new style, yet endearingly written with great optimism.loved it.......ritty
Revel in the vision of a verdant swath, our right to tread that smoother path. Absolutely beautiful. Wish I were feeling more eloquent to praise the skill and the mind that created it.
good poem...the words meander and flow obligingly to your imaginative poetic wits, Saadat...thanks...10
This is haunting, we are every thing that matters. A constant relation to nature of what is felt inside.Saadat, and good ryming too.10
wow what a great couplets with perfect end rhymes.......profound theme with fine imagery...............loved it! 10
This poem is different than your other works Sadaat.. Yes, as Mamta said, this is a musical poem, yet at the same time, this poem gives a good message too... Loved reading this one.. Very Well composed too.. cheers// hope you are doing well! ! Shan
one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a long time. it has such a beat, theme, imagery, melody, rhythm that uplifts and cheers. Mamta
This poem is exceptional.. Beautiful flow of words...