Sunday, September 6, 2009

We Are Everything Comments

Rating: 3.4

Together we are, everything and all.
Not destined to sulk, by the wayside fall.

Or sit all alone.
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Nikhila Churia 25 February 2017

This poem is exceptional.. Beautiful flow of words...

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 February 2016

That's Why we were created. Nice work.

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Bharati Nayak 13 April 2015

The beauty and imagery of this poem compel one to read and re-read it again and again.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 October 2014

Aweinspiring poem against disunity and chosen loneliness! The aquatic imagery is poetically refreshing. And the rhyme scheme makes it a tour de force quality poetry.

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Ken E Hall 31 August 2014

Very nice to read which leaves a good feeling within the self and its worded lines are perfect...in retrospect it is like a mirror to my own happy wed life thanks for this poem...regards

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Yasmin Khan 04 May 2013

The happiness and bliss of being together is celebrated by feasting upon Mother Nature. It's imaginative, surreal a passionate, can be said a painting in words with beautiful visuals.

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Kasia Fedyk 26 May 2012

Sat, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, it truly is magical, Thank you!

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Farah Ilyas 14 May 2011

wow thats a greatttttttttttt u did brillient job sir..........

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Clarence Prince 05 April 2011

'WE are Everything' this poem is a masterpiece, it so well written, it's absolutely wonderful, you've done a fine job here, Saadat. Blessings! ! !

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Leela Devi 27 December 2010

your allusion is rich-deep to ponder on

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Iraj Hammad 20 December 2010

This poem is so cool! A vivid imagination, composed beautifully! Loved it! Keep doing the good work! Good Luck!

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Gita Ashok 02 July 2010

This one is so rich in imagery. Fabulous composition, indeed! I rate it a perfect 10.

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Ritty Patnaik 16 November 2009

dear saadat.....i am sweapt in the tide and flow of this beautiful poem! a new style, yet endearingly written with great optimism.loved it.......ritty

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Rafique Farooqi 14 October 2009

A beautifully written poem exuberant with vigours

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M A 29 September 2009

Revel in the vision of a verdant swath, our right to tread that smoother path. Absolutely beautiful. Wish I were feeling more eloquent to praise the skill and the mind that created it.

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Kesav Easwaran 19 September 2009

good poem...the words meander and flow obligingly to your imaginative poetic wits, Saadat...thanks...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 17 September 2009

This is haunting, we are every thing that matters. A constant relation to nature of what is felt inside.Saadat, and good ryming too.10

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Catrina Heart 16 September 2009

wow what a great couplets with perfect end rhymes.......profound theme with fine imagery...............loved it! 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 September 2009

This poem is different than your other works Sadaat.. Yes, as Mamta said, this is a musical poem, yet at the same time, this poem gives a good message too... Loved reading this one.. Very Well composed too.. cheers// hope you are doing well! ! Shan

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Mamta Agarwal 15 September 2009

one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a long time. it has such a beat, theme, imagery, melody, rhythm that uplifts and cheers. Mamta

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