We Are Energetic Leaves Comments

Message! ! Sage of life, Stage of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Yes sir! NOMO JOBA KUSUM: SANG KASSO PIONG: MOHA DHUTING: DAAN TARING: SOTBO PAPOGNO PONO TOSHMINGL DIBA KORON: VOGOVOTE YA SURJJAI NOMO:

Beautiful poem about the very first moments of dawn. Dawn has only whispered its message of beauty, and we are already energized in anticipation of those first rays, '...in hope to capture a moment.' This poem puts me in mind strongly of Shakespeare's Sonnet 33: 'Full many a glorious morning have I seen Flatter the mountain tops with sovereign eye...' ...but you have captured the first whisper of dawn before the sovereign fully mounts the throne! 'This horizon is going to be painted soon, ' but it is already painting in our minds! 'We are wild leaves of small plants' by our caring beautified, and 'in this mood' we are growing toward the Source of Light. Love dawns in the heart through appreciation of what the Giver of Life is about to impart! Many beautiful lines and sentiments here, Kumarmani. I am especially intrigued by the Mystery within that last line: 'We feel your power in honesty of forest.' Honesty of forest? That is a curious phrase that speaks volumes. Very well done. (And if I may, my left brain wants to interject a bit of science: through photosynthesis, we wild little leaves drink up the sun.) :)

Wow very nice poetic way u compare humans to vibrant leaves. I like the line ESP 'we are wild but dear sun u r civilised. Thumbs up.

The power of the life-giving sun. It infuses life and calms us down. A wonderful meditation, Kumarmani!

We are wild leaves of small plants, Caring ourselves we have beautified, Hearing about your rising in this mood, We are growing towards you in hope. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Reading this poem gives me the feel of a tender leaf shining in the sun and receiving the bliss of God.Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

We are wild leaves of small plants, Caring ourselves we have beautified, Hearing about your rising in this mood, We are growing towards you in hope. brilliantly penned, we have beauty and we can make us energetic in some processes..............,10

Superb beginning..............A fantastic poem to start our day with sun climbing the horizon and we all are getting ready with new energy, new hopes and new determination to take the challenge of the day....10+++

A refined poetic imagination, Mahakul sir. Many thanks.

This is a wonderful and enjoyable poem about energetic leaves.