Wednesday, March 10, 2021

We Are Contrast Yet Live Together.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the petal kept inside the book,
You are the flower that flourishes to bloom.

I am the empty shell thrown by the sea,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shreya Hacks 26 April 2021

Running line parallel lines always together.

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

also faving this gorgeous write

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Susan Williams 13 March 2021

a very lovely write deserving 100 stars! ! !

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me poet yeps poet 11 March 2021

10 stars u have excelled here in HUMILITY GREAT MAN

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Zuzu Mutairi 11 March 2021

Opposite attracts. Nice poem.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 11 March 2021

Simply brilliant poem. Enjoyed reading it.

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Varsha M 10 March 2021

This is magnificent write. So well penned.

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M.J. Lemon 10 March 2021

Terrific verse, Asim! There is no one without the other....

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Deluke Muwanigwa 10 March 2021

Well penned. Indeed we are

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S H 10 March 2021

Wonderful contrast...I am the unweave yarn lying on a bench, You are the silken shawl worn by the queen.

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Ricky Manhatten 10 March 2021

I like such poem, truly wonderful We are contrast yet live together, In the heart of a poet, in the mind of a philosopher.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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