Tuesday, December 22, 2009

We Are Colors Comments

Rating: 4.8

We are colors, colors to time
With varying tones
We fade away as life goes
We are colors, colors to life
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Fasika Ayalew
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Anil Kumar Panda 02 July 2011

very well written poem.there is a philosophical tone to it.loved it.

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Artfully and beautifully composed. Well done my friend.

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Saadat Tahir 30 December 2009

hi F_A what a kliedoscopic and etehral piece...u have here wow very nice cheers

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 23 December 2009

Fasika, this is really a beautiful poem and colorful of course. Feelings and colors are the beauties of the life. I have some reservation regarding blue color. It's sad but deep too. Ocean, sky, eyes, etc all are blue and very deep. You have a great poetic sensibility. Keep up the good work...10/10. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Joseph Poewhit 22 December 2009

Beautiful poem - GOD made some beauties - MERRY

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Fasika Ayalew

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