We Are But Birds Comments

nice! I think this one is my favorite one! !

Yes, they are. Scare away the bad and nurture the good ones. Beautiful and thought provoking poem. CP

We are the birds chirping on the tree name, God..........Some sings threnody some sings rhapsody...........10+++

I really liked this poem. Wonderful expression of ideas, and well chosen imagery.

Well poem. Actually, what has attracted my attention on your poem, is comparing people to these melodious creatures. it is worth reading.

Light does not shine within the bodies, but our veiw of the light is a good thing