Monday, August 4, 2014

We Are Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were two coins
Black and white
They threw me away
I get alone and very alone
...
Read full text

NEGAR ZAKAVATI
COMMENTS
Chris Zachariou 06 August 2014

I always like reading poems which praise peace and love for all. Well written, simple words to express a great idea. I hope and wish that all the people in the world especially in troubled countries like yours and mine have the same sentiments.

0 0 Reply
Seamus O Brian 05 August 2014

Interesting visual. I like the idea of the coins. Thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Dave Walker 05 August 2014

Humanity is what makes a good world, good poem.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success