Wednesday, March 15, 2006

We Are Comments

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If you were here now
I would be so happy.
The glow
When we meet,
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Lindsey Priest
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merc gabriell 15 March 2006

the poem, though short, is able to thoroughly describe the deep shared familiarity in the relationship (whatever kind it is) . deeper as if/nothing needs/explanation/we are! these 4 lines wrap up everything and clearly convey the message. nicely done.

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Lindsey Priest

Lindsey Priest

Huddersfield England
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