Thursday, March 1, 2007

We All Fall Comments

Rating: 4.5

We all fall, sometimes
We all let ourselves down
Sometimes there nothings left to do but to live with what’s been done
You’re the only one who falls
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Brittany Messersmith
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Michael Fischer 03 May 2007

Very nice...the ending was solid. I like the positive message in your poem to never give up and keep trying until you succeed. Nice work...top marks! -Michael

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