Sunday, June 26, 2016

We All Belong Comments

Rating: 5.0

As you grow
You see yourself age beautifully
These wrinkles are mine
My heart is mine
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

You can Survive every battle Because you have to find where you belong For We all belong....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared.

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Luz Hanaii 09 February 2019

Beautiful and inspiring. Yes we all are a piece of the puzzle, we matter and we belong.

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Tom Allport 12 May 2017

a wise worded poem of believing in ones self and to also belonging to the rest of the human race? ...........well written

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2017

Seems referring to collective unconscious, consciously or unconsciously, as well as to individuality. Thanks for sharing.

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Christopher Tye 23 March 2017

Wonderful poem, you seem to have wisdom far beyond your years.

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Bill Galvin 12 September 2016

Good stuff, Lyn... as usual.

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Annette Aitken 10 September 2016

Thank you for this poem....your beautiful words...I am proud to me.... Annette

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Excellent how u present how to age poetically. With yor talent u should never stop writing. Enjoyed yor super cool poem. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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Kim Barney 23 August 2016

You may be aging beautifully, but I am just aging! You are a lot younger than I am, anyway. In any case, this is a beautiful poem, and should stand up WITHOUT aging for a long time. Well done!

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Smoky Hoss 16 August 2016

Superb Lyn! So true; verry, very good and honest words. Love this one!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Where you belong to you find this in heart and mind and this is wonderful truth. Very interesting and amazing drafting is shared with wise perception and imagery....10

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Hans Vr 29 July 2016

Wonderful words and a fantastic picture. A pleasure to read this uplifting piece of art. A big ten

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 July 2016

Beautiful write Lyn with great message very well portrayed. Respect yourself, which is most important in life. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2016

Respect yourself and, be proud of who you are! Nice piece of work.

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Tony Karas 27 June 2016

An excellent write my friend. Yes we all need to find where we belong.

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Kelly Kurt 26 June 2016

Your age has brought graceful thoughts, Lyn

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 June 2016

Ageing gracefully can be a beautiful experience as ageing is a part of life cycle. Thanks for sharing this meaningful poem.

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