Tuesday, January 15, 2019

We All Are On Parole Comments

Rating: 4.6

For his fair conduct, goodly grade,
The killer was out on parole.

Easy, for justice to give dole,
...
Read full text

Aniruddha Pathak
COMMENTS

...........Reborn, are we not on parole? Prisoners are sent on parole for good conduct, but we are sent to the earth on parole for purificatory process

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 28 January 2020

Alas, very few earn their parole well, But God is kind and hopes, one day 'he/she will realize'. Yes, well said, we are on parole for purification. Thanks dear poet.

0 0
Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2019

A very perceptive write. Wonderful thoughts to ponder about. The laws of men are different from God. Liked how the great Poet made a distinction as how men and Heaven dispense justice. Another great poem from a great discerning mind.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 21 December 2019

In a way I was looking for your comments on this poem, today it has come, and I feel good about it, thank you so much dear poet.

0 0
Bri Edwards 17 November 2019

" The killed when can't come back from dead." i'd make " when" the first word in line. Perhaps Heaven is TOO FULL to take more souls? Or perhaps God is giving us a second (or 3rd or 100th?) chance to earn Heaven? We are really 'on parole' from! ! ! bri ;)

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

... contd The word heaven is used here in a slightly different sense, not paradise, but in the sense of Destiny or Fate, 'those that decide fate'... You know as I too that there is no heaven for us (not universal 'us', but both us) . May be a few days there for some accidental good deeds, but what awaits us is perhaps.... so enjoy your parole.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak 18 November 2019

well, the second part came but not the first... so let me reconstruct what I said earlier... First, could I pray have my poetic freedom? Second, 'the' can be used as a stressed syllable, but the way i did I thought was better, for my tetra-cord (tetra meter) iambic (eight syllabic line) .

0 0
Chinedu Dike 01 November 2019

A insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing, Aniruddha. Remain enriched.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 01 November 2019

'Remain enriched', ah such wonderful good wishes, what more a poet can expect, thanks so much dear poet Chinnedu Dike.

0 0
Akhtar Jawad 24 March 2019

The idea of Punar Janm (lives after lives) appeals, as it replies so many questions that can not be replied by any other ethics.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 25 March 2019

Very true, Akhtar Jawad, it is clear that apart from a good poet, you are a serious thinker with a thinking that goes beyond your basic faith. That should be the spirit of time, and if we all think that way a lot of ills on this planet can be wiped out. Thanks for your feedback.

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

For his fair conduct, goodly grade, The killer was out on parole....brilliantly expressed! What a beautiful poem! My pleasure reading it again and again!

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, adhikasya adhikam phalam, as they say.

0 0
Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2019

Rebirth? ? so many questions.. will we carry the memories in us when we are reborn.? your poem dear Aniruddha made me think a lot. thank u. tony

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 23 January 2019

Thank you Dr Antony, I guess you're a student of Indic philosophy.

0 0
T.Rajesh 16 January 2019

I believe, we are reborn like on parole, to complete the unfinished agenda of our soul. A brilliant poem that looks probingly into the nature of our justice system.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Thank you and Hello T Rajesh, I welcome you to my poems

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2019

Divine laws might look rather crude, But justice feels forced to look good! Wonderful expression! Loved reading this insightful piece of poetry! (10)

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Dr Swain, your interpretation hits the bull'e eye. We're on the same page, and thank you for your feedback.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Dr Swain, your interpretation is on the dot, we are on the same page, and thank you your feedback.

0 0
Mahtab Bangalee 15 January 2019

beautifully said- We All Are On Parole

1 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee, we are on Parole but we seldom are aware, and often jump the parole..

0 0
Ratnakar Mandlik 15 January 2019

Contradictions in life and social system pin pointed wonderfully. Thanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2019

Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik, and though rather late let me wish you happy 2019.

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 January 2019

Divine laws are always working in lap of nature and these laws motivate mind always. Fair conduct is always admired. A nice sharing is done and we love to read such nice poem.10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 15 January 2019

Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul, your feedback carries some weight.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success