We All Are Clouds Comments

A TIMELESS POEM. The beautiful words embedded in this piece gripped me to go through with this long poem. Every stanza has its own gem. Pure poetic joy! .You nailed it Akhtar. Onto my Poem List..and the Poet ..to my Poet List.10+++

I suppose I should not be surprised by the welling in my eyes, having read this. Your talent is undeniable, and your love for everything has always been evident

A lovely poem! My favorite lines: Come on our banks bare footed/O you! The newly married couple! /Wait a little more we shall pass by the desert/we have ecstatic wine to excite them for love. Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)

Amazing, wonderful and an outstanding poem, a masterpiece!

Dear Akhtar, such a wonderful lovely poem...10+++

I forgot to say without question, it goes into my favourites.

Akhtar, an astounding example of the breadth of your poetic skills. Absolutely, the best that I have read from your ink.Be proud of what you have achieved for you are A Poet of Note.+++++++++++++++10

Our paths of journey may be different but we all have a common destination. We all are pilgrims of love, We start as love and we end as love. We are clouds, ......... We shall hug each other and do all that is done in love. We shall enter the ocean as a single river! .........so touching and haunting with nice theme. Brilliant poem.