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'We are here to make the world better' - yes, we (the poets) are!

I like some of the points that you make in your poem. Believe in yourself, be strong, don't worry about those who mock you, what matters most is kindness and that's what helps to make the world a better place. At least that's what I appreciated most about your poem.. A very mature and wise girl you are!

G.B. i save most of my mean words for my wife. so you are spared! i'll only correct one of the spelling errors, as i find it most important. Griping on a wall, standing single on a cold mountain. if i am correct, griping is a form of the verb gripe which means 'to complain', while what-i-think-you-want, gripping is a form of the verb grip which means 'to hang on (to something) tightly'. SO, although i suppose one could be griping on a wall, it would make more sense to be gripping on a wall. i do like this poem. this i think is my favorite line: Be strong, hold back your fears, .......of course fear can be protective (at times) when heeded. it can also be limiting (at other times) , as you suggest. thanks for sharing. :) bri