Wayward Heart Comments

a good poem in sweet rhyming scheme...good flow of words, Asley...the opening stanza outstanding...10

You are most assuredly a young lady with a gift. Those who encouraged you were correct. The reason for this, is the fact that you make the reading of your lines a pleasure in itself. The best poets have the strange gift you leave the reader wishing for more words. Your word combinations are wonderful and have a melody that is yours alone. I am giving this poem a ten and placing your name on my list for a return. GW62

A very nicely written piece of work on a timeless and eternal theme... Great Work

profound............

This is a really great poem a real tear jerker. nice work :)

Lovely title and great lines! : 'Your gentle touch and doting kiss', 'Two heart once eternally matched, are now timelessly detached'. I really enjoyed it!