Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Ways Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day is musical,
Dancing on floor,

Night is magical,
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Geetha Jayakumar 24 October 2014

Beautiful poem, life portrayed very well in few words. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2014

Beautifully put. I particularly enjoyed the last two lines. They tied the whole piece together and the final line had me sighing. Bravo

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 October 2014

Wonderful poetry........I like it

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 October 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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