Way Too Soon … Comments

Excellent penning! I really like this poem a lot. Very well depicted.

remembering; another way to celebrate good times you spent. Lets sing separation, Separation is the king. A body that does not know separation, is but a corpse... Baba Fareed

I am touched! who will be deceived by your lively laughter any more? i say amento your prayer for her.

A very touching poem! We all have lost someone that we love some time or other. Memories are always unbearably painful..heart snatching. All we can do is to soothe ourselves, think positive because life must go on..

This is a wonderful poem. Though the whole poem is spectacular with emotions and breathtaking feelings for a departed mate with beatiful rhythm and suited similes and metaphors I love and moved greatly by the lines: No more loving words from beautiful lips. No more smile as the coffee she sips Only memories in heart to be felt in the dark. Reason as to why so soon, not ours to ask! Very very nice.

nice one....... very unusual from a man of medicin to verse himself n such refined tone great job doc