Monday, March 13, 2006

Waxed Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Broken crayon
grimy orange,
Smudges of
dirt, of love,
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Ballerina With Fins
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Lauren Michaels 13 May 2006

I really love this poem. We all get caged into the reality of adulthood.

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William Jackson 13 March 2006

Good poem. Sad but good. Everyone starts out as a child full of the colorful bright hope of Crayon dreams, and then for some the crayons are broken and forgotten as is childhood and hope.

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David Darbyshire 13 March 2006

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? this is the same poem no? I thought I had commented before? well it's the same? good one? ?

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