Sunday, September 6, 2020

Wax, Flax! Comments

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Birth,
Naked!
Exposed to life! ! !
Entering into the world.
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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Parents should teach the truth! ! ! For their children to grow up positively. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Life's journey! ! ! Birth to death! Living and learning always. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2020

The last two stanzas are excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

Children should understand the importance of teaching of their parents. In reality parents help in uplifting righteous morality of the children. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Edward Kofi Louis

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