Saturday, December 12, 2015

Waves, Triolet Comments

Rating: 5.0

When blowing wind of your love strokes,
ocean of my heart starts oscillating.
And therein high amplitude waves evoke,
when blowing wind of your love strokes.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 12 December 2015

When blowing wind of your love strokes Ocean of my heart starts oscillating! Hats off to the flight of imagery. Enjoyed the triolet. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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