Wednesday, September 26, 2018

Waves Rushed Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Waves rushed,
to meet us at the sand.
You took my hand
to make the us connect.
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Bree Z Love
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2018

Your rushing revelations, denounced Love. All, I could feel were those Waves. Disappearing, into the depths of the sea. I realized too late, I was quite deceived......so touching and impressive. This is a beautiful poem on deception so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

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