Thursday, October 30, 2008

Waves Rush By Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sounds of the sea are now so far away,
I strain to hear the never-ending waves come in,
At this distance, all I hear is my imagination,
Magnifying the wind, as it rushes by this emptiness.
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Al Ramos 17 November 2008

Waves of kudos for this piece, my kind of poetry.

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premji premji 13 November 2008

beautiful lines anita.. thanks..

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Michael Fischer 08 November 2008

Great poem Anita...vividly depicted and beautifully crafted. The last line wrapped the poem up perfectly. Ten! -Michael

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