Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Waves From Melbourne Comments

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The waves used to hit the shore lightly
They would glimmer and shimmer brightly
They used to crash so brilliantly
Shinning a nice pure blue so brilliantly
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Julie McLeod
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C.ann Penning 17 June 2013

Nice imagery in this write :) Well done poet!

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