Waves And Thorns (Tanka Series) Comments

Learn to live with thorns. Often it comes from your bush. Very true.

Need a long long rest. Somewhere in oblivion, On the higher grounds- Above the slippery slopes There is a paradise. loving this paragraph...it all reads lovely, but that one stands out to me... Annette

A beautifully envisioned superb poem incorporating hard earned nuggets of wisdom. The inference displayed in the last stanza should have been linked with positive attitude towards life and a desire to enjoy all the hues it presents, in my opinion.