Tuesday, December 12, 2023

Waves And Seagulls Comments

Rating: 5.0

Down by the sea,
where the waves crash and roar
seagulls take flight,
above the sandy shore.
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 12 January 2024

............(cont,) ignore the last few words in my previous comment! ! ! (cont,) I'm disappointed how FEW 'doubts I had reading the poem, as follows: (cont.) ...

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2024

Asim, It does seem....to me that your poem is a 'Hit' with readers! I give 5 stars for its topics, rhyming, and flow. But, for the record, I'm disappointed...(cont.)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 January 2024

Congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day. An accolade you truly deserved. Beautifully crafted and presented.

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Nabakishore Dash 11 January 2024

Congrats for pod.

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Nabakishore Dash 11 January 2024

Awesome poem, but the last stanza is superb dear Dr Nehal.With your poem I saw the scenery in my mental sphere.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 11 January 2024

Beautiful closing lines, Asim. Nice work

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Congratulations on POD, Dr Nehal. This beautiful poem makes a pictorial presentation of the harmonic existence of the waves and the seagulls. Marvellous. A deserving recognition, the pod

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

CONGRATS once again, I like this poem very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

Foreign eyes oft creates gorgeous poems, I know that, dear Dr. Asim Nehal. But you are now home again, no?

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Kim Barney 11 January 2024

Very nice, Asim. Congratulations on member poem of the day!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

YESTERDAY my poem had been chosen too by Poem Hunter and Team. Would you please read and give a short comment. Thank YOU, Dr. Asim.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

Loveliest English Landscape at its highest Beauty. Thank you for sharing, Dr. Nehal.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2024

CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Super poem, Dr. M.Asim Nehal. TOP Marks. This is great Beauty nesarest to us. In my country, we have Sea Gulls either, I know how adventuring, Beauty this is. One can enjoy for hours at their place.

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Sando Hussam 16 December 2023

Again a brilliant poem.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 December 2023

A beautiful poem. Very well crafted

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Rob Lamberton 15 December 2023

I love to see seagulls especially on the beach! Great tribute!

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Rob Lamberton 15 December 2023

I love to see seagulls!

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Sandra Feldman 15 December 2023

Thank you for this beautiful creation that makes us all feel so free. Collecting the well being and sensations of the seagulls and the sea, that make life feel free and beautiful again!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 December 2023

This poem made me think I am there TFS Bravo Asim! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 14 December 2023

Beautiful and meaningful..... thank u, my friend...

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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