Down by the sea,
where the waves crash and roar
seagulls take flight,
above the sandy shore.
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Asim, It does seem....to me that your poem is a 'Hit' with readers! I give 5 stars for its topics, rhyming, and flow. But, for the record, I'm disappointed...(cont.)
Congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day. An accolade you truly deserved. Beautifully crafted and presented.
Awesome poem, but the last stanza is superb dear Dr Nehal.With your poem I saw the scenery in my mental sphere.
Congratulations on POD, Dr Nehal. This beautiful poem makes a pictorial presentation of the harmonic existence of the waves and the seagulls. Marvellous. A deserving recognition, the pod
Foreign eyes oft creates gorgeous poems, I know that, dear Dr. Asim Nehal. But you are now home again, no?
YESTERDAY my poem had been chosen too by Poem Hunter and Team. Would you please read and give a short comment. Thank YOU, Dr. Asim.
Loveliest English Landscape at its highest Beauty. Thank you for sharing, Dr. Nehal.
CONGRATS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Super poem, Dr. M.Asim Nehal. TOP Marks. This is great Beauty nesarest to us. In my country, we have Sea Gulls either, I know how adventuring, Beauty this is. One can enjoy for hours at their place.
I love to see seagulls especially on the beach! Great tribute!
Thank you for this beautiful creation that makes us all feel so free. Collecting the well being and sensations of the seagulls and the sea, that make life feel free and beautiful again!
This poem made me think I am there TFS Bravo Asim! ! ! !
............(cont,) ignore the last few words in my previous comment! ! ! (cont,) I'm disappointed how FEW 'doubts I had reading the poem, as follows: (cont.) ...