Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Waves Comments

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From where come the waves
That beg and foam,
Call and plead
Rolling on never alone -
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Smoky Hoss
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Juan Olivarez 06 August 2012

We are all part of a grand scheme, the waves in all their power and force put many questions on our minds and on the tips of our tongues. Oh that we could find the answers to the eternal rhyme.

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Simon Odhiambo 06 August 2012

Nature observers ask themselves so many questions and poetry doubles the queries. I like this poem...

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Heather Wilson 02 August 2012

The waves were a part of you in this poem, an enjoyable read,

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Valerie Dohren 02 August 2012

We have a close affinity with water and are at one with nature - very good write Smoky.

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Eric Cockrell 01 August 2012

i believe they are you, and you are the waves! great poem!

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