Thursday, February 24, 2005

Watery Lane Comments

Rating: 5.0

The slow, thoughtful walk down to the river,
Reminds me of the last time and I get a shiver,
Standing there watching water flow by,
Finally I realise its like saying goodbye,
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James Lee Watts
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Allan James Saywell 24 February 2005

I gave you ten for effort james, i will tell you something about poetry the less you say, the more people will understand, what you have to say think about this for a while, get back to me, we will have a talk example) the goodby was said In the chill morning As i slowly walked to the river Warm regards AJS

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