Friday, December 26, 2008

Watery Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

before me does she stand
like a watery angel.
everthing, did i forget about myself.
i was immersed and drowned in her magic.
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ajith patnaik
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Anjali Sinha 31 December 2008

wow beautiful ajith, i had tears in my eyes I want to see you happy dear at all times Oh Lord let it not be a dream for Ajith let it be the truth-- make it happen A+++ and many 10ssssss anjali

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Demon lover 31 December 2008

thats a very beautiful poem

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Kesav Easwaran 30 December 2008

dedicated words on dedicated feelings...good poem Ajith, , , dreams do have a telling on real things happening...10

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Seema Aarella 26 December 2008

Very deeply expressed feelings, the beauty of dream and its pleasure....along with the the fear of facing the reality, which is inevitable. Quite a nice concept...and ending is really good. hope your feelings transcend this dream without being altered by harsh truth! ! ! !

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