Friday, June 12, 2015

Waterwings Comments

Rating: 4.5

The mornings are his,
blue and white
like the tablecloth at breakfast.
He's happy in the house,
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Cathy Song
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A vivid visual pic in words. Interesting poem. Again posted in 2015. How it escaped my attention remains a mystery.

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Pasquale Dimeola 30 September 2015

Your poetry is visually outstanding and delicate to the senses. I have visited Maui and now know what to expect in heaven. God Bless

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2015

One of the best new poems I have read in a while

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 June 2015

Wow this was in sublime metaphor and it makes for an awesome poem in imagery and description. U write so artistically. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Cathy Song

Cathy Song

Wahiawa, Hawaii
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