Monday, December 12, 2005

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Rating: 4.5

I linger in the doorway, but wasting time.
open doors are watching the road
no move, no sign of life.
lines are inviting me to challenge
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Mahyar Goodarzi
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Sandra Fowler 12 December 2005

There is good imagery here. Keep on writing fine poems. You have something of worth to offer. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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