Saturday, July 5, 2014

Waters That Dance Comments

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Waters
That
Dance
Yet
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 14 July 2014

This poem begins with dancing waters, presumably the Mediterranean or inland lakes and rivers, and then pulls in the mighty Summer Sun which pounds the earth with light and heat. That's the essence of Summer. And your poem is thoroughly relevant to us in the planet's northern tier - we too have dancing waters, the Mississippi and St. Croix and Minnesota Rivers, and we have the Sun, often in high summer, pouring too much heat and light over us. But no complaints. Your poem implies our best response is to dance like the waters in gratitude!

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