Tuesday, July 26, 2016

Waters Of Peace Comments

Rating: 3.5

A hard black rock divides this stream,
Creating waves of friction.
And yet in time the rock dissolves
By the water's slow persuasion.
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Tom Billsborough
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Mihaela Pirjol 28 July 2016

A great allegorical poem, with lovely flow as the river itself. Beautifully composed.

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Tom Billsborough 28 July 2016

I owe you a few now young Cyprian. Might make this a Mihaela day after lunch. I'm starving! Loved youyr Lighthouse poem!

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