Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Watering The Plants Comments

Rating: 4.5

Stolen piece of land from the blue skies,
Is paradise obliged, why don't it cries?
Watering the plants she got a bliss,
Paradise-owner's lovely flying kiss,
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Hazel Durham 19 May 2015

Stunning write and a wonderful tribute to Valsa with very inspired lines!

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Valsa George 07 May 2015

Akhtarji.... you have honored me more than once with your sweet verse! I feel greatly obliged. Yes, I like green spaces as I am essentially a daughter of Nature! ..... Thanks... thanks a lot!

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Khalid Saifullah 06 May 2015

A nice poem of on a beautiful picture...................10

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