Sunday, September 14, 2008

Waterfalls Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sensual sanctuary from the heat
an emerald pool to cool their feet
A natural shower for them to share
as he runs his fingers through her hair
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Tia Maria
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Carl Harris 25 March 2009

Aah, a beautifully written romantic poem, Tia, with wonderful implications in it's sensuous ending. Once again, a brief poem, yet one that is quite complete in the tale it told so well and so visully appealing to the eye of any reader's mind. Your superb imagery in this poem was as lush as any tropical rain forest and as refreshing as standing naked in the rain. Carl.

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Kris Smith 14 September 2008

Words beautifully crafted together, a warm and sensuous poem lovingly penned Thanks for sharing Chris 10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 September 2008

Well that's amazing posted one a Similar topic... Andy 10: -)

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