Monday, August 31, 2009

Waterfalls Comments

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As I sit by this stream of endless thoughts, passing by as I am taught to listen as they are brought to me then fade away for nougat, these waterfalls of thoughts.
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Rachel Butler 29 October 2009

'As I sit by this stream of endless thoughts' Rachel Ann Butler

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Mimi Brown 12 September 2009

Good poem. I liked the line 'Where words Collide with worlds divided it's wisdom's pearls that stir my observant soul.' That's the hardest part of being a writer; getting all the words down before they flow away. Thanks.

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~ Jon London ~ 07 September 2009

I've always found water to be such a peaceful place to be around...sitting by a stream..I'd often just sit alone with my thoughts..in such calmness....This is a wonderful poem Paul....flowing verse with the bonus of soothing imagery....well penned 10

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Eyan Desir 03 September 2009

Nice poem good write.........................

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Obinna Eruchie 01 September 2009

Thoughts fuelled by inspiration gushing like waterfalls. A wonderful descriptive poem.

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Beauty Philosophy 31 August 2009

Thinking is the best activity a human being can do, enjoy the waterfalls of thoughts, it's from them that new ideas and good poems are generated...Good write.

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