Waterfall Comments

Great poem val❤️👌👏👍

A rich river of reflection that emits emotions that empties the eyes of tears. Wonderfully worded my friend!

Waterfalls do tend to ellicit powerful yet melancholic emotions. You captured that feeling in this poem.

An amazing poem, truly fantastic really like it.

Such sweet divinity expressed in so few words. Amazing.

From this fine piece it is easy to see the age old comparison betweens sadness and tears and waterfalls. A succinct poem with delicate emotions and raging landscapes.

A fine write in surrealism form (visually) set down by the latter section.. Your words create flamboyant strong movements of water, falling to a trickle of pain.. Bravo.. Karen

I was up and then brought crashing down by this poem Val, good work though.