Waterfall Comments

nice haiku...reflects your poetic thought of composition & expression..

nice haiku, have a deep meaning inside....haiku reflects poetic thought..great

This is a beautiful haiku, Tiffany, well written and structured. You've done a great job. Enjoyed very much.

Wow! ! Seriously Wow. I love when true art says volumes, with minimal expression. Makes it all the more powerful. Beautiful.

Beautiful image these three short lines create.I have a doubt in the use of the phrase 'rocket over'. pl. verify its usage in a dictionary.

Its vibrant energy slushes up Above the puny rocks below Its roar of magnitude infinity As it hits The minute grains of sands On a tiny island. Oh, what can be compared than to the vastless and bottomless sea? Yet sadly Its beauty is no longer abound It awaits its death around.