Andres Gonzalez

Andres Gonzalez

Metropolitan December 24,1992. at 12: 00 a.m
Monday, May 5, 2008

Waterfall Comments

Rating: 3.5

My tears are like a waterfall
once I start I can't stop.
If only you knew,
What tis kind of sadness does to you.
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Andres Gonzalez
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Greenwolfe 1962 17 July 2008

I like the form and striucture of this poem. I read it as being two stanzas. A division there may have helped some. The length may be a little too long for the message and that may be the biggest flaw. The wording was good but unspectacular. Essentially it falls in the medium range. GW62

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Andres Gonzalez

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Metropolitan December 24,1992. at 12: 00 a.m
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