I like the form and striucture of this poem. I read it as being two stanzas.
A division there may have helped some. The length may be a little too long for the message and that may be the biggest flaw. The wording was good but unspectacular. Essentially it falls in the medium range.
GW62
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I like the form and striucture of this poem. I read it as being two stanzas. A division there may have helped some. The length may be a little too long for the message and that may be the biggest flaw. The wording was good but unspectacular. Essentially it falls in the medium range. GW62