Waterfall Comments
Our love was as deep as the deepest ocean,
filled with emotion, passion, and devotion.
Years passed and I felt we will always be together,
sailing like a ship in the open sea forever.
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions.
A fine start with a nice poem, miharbi. You may like to read my poem, Love and. Thanks
Very well, the poem is perfect and enjoyable, the rhymes are so solid and great. nice one
loved it................it is full of emotion, though very sad, do keep writing, would love to hear from you
A really great poem, like it, a great poem, May i invite you to read my new poem called, Stars In The Night.
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7/27/2025 1:34:21 PM # 1.0.0
It was far to late, as you were no where to be seen, and now I can only dream of what could have been. For Now our love has vanished in the mist of all, like a ship lost at a waterfall. A dream of what could have been. fine poem..full of desire. tony