Sunday, March 1, 2020

Watercourse Comments

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I was intent to cross that watercourse
Full of water, my judgment deep
I got in and moved up, at halfway reach
I gave up and pulled out in a creep;
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Mahtab Bangalee 12 March 2020

beautiful poem penned, beautifully said- Life is a a strict teacher and experiences the lessons, sweet and sour//

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Valsa George 07 March 2020

Sometimes we plunge into situations thinking that we can successfully handle them. But once we start doing, we realize that things are too complicated and beyond our power to handle. In such cases, it is better to drop it! This wisdom we get through experience. A beautiful poem crisp and profound!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2020

Water! ! The depth of it! Lessons. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 March 2020

A brilliant poem imbued with wisdom and insight When we plunge into something we must assess first if we have the capability to do so. Yet, we want to try everything and whatever the consequence of our undertaking is a great lesson that can guide us to propel to a better path.

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Captain Cur 03 March 2020

Excellent thought! Those depths we believe just within our reach oftentimes try to pull us under. Much, much deeper than we imagine, as is life, knowledge and love.

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yoonoos peerbocus 02 March 2020

balance comes only at a price..when in the fray.meaningful

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 March 2020

your first philosophical poem on life's depths being fathmless wonderful poet friend 100000000++++++

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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