Sunday, October 20, 2013

Watercolour Dawn Comments

Rating: 4.7

Dawn sky, watery blue streaked red and gold,
by the hand of God.
Mountain ranges like humpbacked somnolent dinosaurs
Left behind from a long forgotten age.
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Noreen Carden
COMMENTS
Mary Forrester 24 January 2015

Such a stunningly beautiful poem Noreen, I love it

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Daniel Brick 28 May 2014

The idea of rising early to encounter the pure beauty of the day is a worthy goal. William Stafford said, if you want to feel free, wake up at 4 am. You will not be oppressed. A collateral idea but still one emphasizing facing light in its earliest manifestation. I identify with the branches which AWAIT THE SAP OF SPRING. In my living memory I have not felt such gratitude for the arrival of Spring 2014. In fact, it's the END OF WINTER that I really, truly needed. But now I can dispel those impatient memories and revel in GOD'S OWN WATERCOLOUR DAWN - for which I thank you! !

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Kanav Justa 26 January 2014

Welcome cover for the hungry birds Whose song is the orchestral soundtrack to God's own watercolour dawn , , beautifully written,

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Gary H 20 December 2013

Awww yaaa i like this one thats for true. Like im there

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Saadat Tahir 08 December 2013

nice piece of poetry there... you mention the name.... but really...be it winder-mere, coniston, buttermeare or dervent.... the poem celebrates and rings everywhere. for divinity is one and for us mortals the observing eye that we depend on a unity too. charged and fervent lines. and you have given it a really travel by feel.... i for one was sitting right there beside you, ya on the 'coach' from bowness to ambleside... lovely :) liked

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Charles Darnell 26 November 2013

Lovely landscape poem...I hope to visit Ireland someday.

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Valerie Dohren 24 November 2013

A stunningly descriptive write - enjoyed reading.

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John Brown 11 November 2013

Nice poem Noreen. It reminds me of my youth, when I used to get up very early to go fishing with my mates, on the banks of a local pond - sadly gone now.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 November 2013

You've incredibly painted the dawn sky and the hovering mist over the Lake Loch Conn. Thanks for the note. Promised to myself that from tomorrow, shall again resume my dawn walks.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 October 2013

you make me see and regret... for the beauty of dawn and missing it oftner than not.10/10.

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Smoky Hoss 28 October 2013

What an absolutely pretty poem; it glows as if truly a fine painting, done in words. Beautiful.

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Bri Edwards 27 October 2013

i was distracted a bit by the misplaced apostrophes. but, ah yes, the dawn! thanks for reminding me of it; i rarely see it. these are some nice picturesque descriptions of nature. thanks for sharing, noreen. :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2013

I admire d godly divine mentions with which u laced d poem. God deserves to b apreciatd dis way like in yor marvelous poem. Pls do review my latest poem.

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2013

A great image you shared with us here, so nice..very well done painted and described_Soul

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Yasmin Khan 22 October 2013

A bright poem like a watercolor landscape celebrating the blissful momnets

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Andrew Blakemore 22 October 2013

A lovely written piece about the beauty of the dawn.

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Valsa George 22 October 2013

Beautiful description of the dawn! The birds song... the orchestral sound track to God's water colour dawn.. nice image! !

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Adeline Foster 21 October 2013

Thanks for the comment and you don't do so bad yourself. Read mine - Brush Strokes - Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 20 October 2013

this is beautifully written. the imagery is great, love this one

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