Sunday, April 9, 2023

Water Wonder Fills In Shifting Shades Comments

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perceive the way the light catches on the ice
on a glacier on a frozen waterfall perpetual moment
glacier water frozen still time stop still imperceivable flows
perceive the way light dances on icicles
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Denis Mair 10 April 2023

Capriciousness laces this poem with sparkling strung beads of water bead images. Water-wonderful.

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many times I have felt, the mystery the power the wonder, in the capricious transformation of weather, in differing weather conditions, in differing seasons, traced across the minds eye

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I wrote the poem 'Capricious Transformation Weather', inspired by a comment on my poem 'Water Wonder Fills In Shifting Shades', by the poet Denis Mair and dedicated to Denis Mair.

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