Monday, March 19, 2018

Water Wheel Comments

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Novice in the catacombe

Imbedded there in timeless grail
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Dawn Novus
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

Upon the watered terrain a glistening sphere Oh she dances full and round and teal the colour her squeals of delight sound Wow, a beautiful way of presenting this theme. Thanks for the sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 March 2018

Whispering of old sin washed wet and clean! ! With the muse of life embedded in her eyes! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Upon the watered terrain a glistening sphere is amazingly captured and expressed here. A brilliant sharing is done...10

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