Thursday, October 23, 2014

Water, Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

‘Water' seems a fitting title
of this rhyme on something vital
for the beings we take care of
and the others we're aware of.
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Harley White
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Saji G Praleyagiri 25 October 2017

MS. White, water is life of earth and beings V.good.The existence life on earth depends upon protection of nature..A nature poem I eshrined 'Beings' Silent Request' U. may come across.

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Bill Cantrell 01 January 2017

What most people see as a common simple drop of water, you see as a orb of fluidic wonder, and this is what poetry is all about! , yes...water water everywhere and not a drop to drink, there is no carbon dating on the face of water, yet a glacier will reveal time to an extent until thawed, then we are back to square one, I truly appreciate the research you do before writing a poem, I have never seen another poet like you, thanks so much for posting.

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Harley White 01 January 2017

Thank you so much for your eloquent comments! I can hardly express how much your words encourage me... like water for a thirsty plant...

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Loke Kok Yee 05 April 2016

long, captivating and amazing, love every line thanks

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Harley White 25 October 2017

Thanks very much for your response!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2015

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Harley White 02 December 2015

So glad you liked it...

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Kim Barney 13 December 2014

This is a great poem. A little bit long, but very well written. I'm surprised that no one has commented on it before.

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Harley White 02 December 2015

Thank you for the comment... I appreciate it...

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