‘Water' seems a fitting title
of this rhyme on something vital
for the beings we take care of
and the others we're aware of.
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What most people see as a common simple drop of water, you see as a orb of fluidic wonder, and this is what poetry is all about! , yes...water water everywhere and not a drop to drink, there is no carbon dating on the face of water, yet a glacier will reveal time to an extent until thawed, then we are back to square one, I truly appreciate the research you do before writing a poem, I have never seen another poet like you, thanks so much for posting.
Thank you so much for your eloquent comments! I can hardly express how much your words encourage me... like water for a thirsty plant...
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
This is a great poem. A little bit long, but very well written. I'm surprised that no one has commented on it before.
MS. White, water is life of earth and beings V.good.The existence life on earth depends upon protection of nature..A nature poem I eshrined 'Beings' Silent Request' U. may come across.