Pure elements formed into a compound
Running over blocking others sound
What should be and who is gonna be
The one that helps us see
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I agree, you have a real gift showing through on this write, very well done....
I'm very proud of you! you were listening! You talk about me! Girl you did your thing. YOU ARE ONE IN A MILLION! , Maybe now you'll start believing. you have a rare gift. It's not to many young poets like you. You put a light in my eye's that will always keep me reaching high. You did the poem justice. You've done an excellent job! all smiles on this face. god bless! Lov always.........
wow. ur one of few poets that can pull off that kind of style. i wonder, do u know who bob dylan is? this poem reflects his style. it's controversial and beautifully written at the same time. im amazed. great job. much love