Saturday, August 23, 2008

Water Poem Comments

Rating: 3.0

The ocean, the sea,
The lake, the waters,
black, wine-dark,
grey, green, blue.
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Fred Babbin
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Mark Nwagwu 14 September 2008

write when you can, do all you can when you can. I'll get going Fred, and write some more poems, seeing you're still active at it, not thinking of when you can't, that is, can't write. Great flow of running words.

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Ency Bearis 23 August 2008

nice flow..great verses... Ency Bearis

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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 August 2008

yes i love this poem fred. good advice.

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