Friday, December 20, 2013

Water Paint Comments

Rating: 5.0

More chaos more agitation
We all are tied with the wave
Enough we lived here
Spoiled earth and atmosphere
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Kayla Daley 21 February 2014

this is very brilliant and deep I love it but I hate war I am partial to being a pacifist

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Kayla Daley 21 February 2014

this is very brilliant and deep I love it but I hate war I am partial to being a pacifist

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

War for water is another thing to worry about. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Yasmin Khan 22 December 2013

Ah, you are going to flee away into a cave..........why so disillusioned?

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