Wednesday, August 10, 2005

Water On Sand Comments

Rating: 4.5

I woke up and everything was different,
I had different friends,
That cared about me,
The music i listened to,
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Kiersten Reilly
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Melissa Barber 05 September 2005

I love your poems... all of them! ! This poem reminded me of someone I loved too.

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Seán O' Muiriosa 10 August 2005

There is a lot of sadness in this poem, that is obvious, but I think you have greatly captured a feeling that we all feel in our lives at some stage. This is very good writing. Well done. Warm regards, Seán

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Scott Clegg 10 August 2005

excellent poem...great message and love the flow and tempo...

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